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Feb 19, 2023Liked by Kyle Young

Omg, such a cliffhanger! Ready for the next installment, sir!

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Woke up in the middle of the night last night, thought about what happens next and changed everything.

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Feb 19, 2023Liked by Kyle Young

Oh my gosh, this is riveting!

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Thank you Jacqueline.

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I honestly felt I was reading one of my CIA espionage books, but this is the real deal. This is truly an amazing piece. I’m anxious for

The next installment!

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Sadly, much of it IS true.

Do your CIA books don't mention straw bale houses or metabolic flexibility?:)

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Unfortunately, no they don’t.

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An interesting story. Am enjoying. Would love to be self sufficient like the family. A few typos found. First paragraph under rebels: conscious should be conscience.

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Someday when I get rich and famous I hope to be able to hire an editor. Thanks for catching that.

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Feb 19, 2023Liked by Kyle Young

And, And, And...................................................................................................?

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Needed to do some character development for these guys.

The action begins with the next one in the series.

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Feb 19, 2023Liked by Kyle Young

Quite a story.

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Thanks Susan.

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If most of it were not really happening, I wouldn't have been able to conjure it up.

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That reads exactly like a second rate novel, and so it is.

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Feb 19, 2023Liked by Kyle Young

Please tell me you’re on your 5th booster.

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😂 good one! 👍

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I don't read this type of novel and I am absolutely at the edge of my seat waiting for the rest of the story. You must be insanely jealous that Kyle has this gift for writing and story telling.

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You're rude 😒

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deletedFeb 19, 2023Liked by Kyle Young
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Working on it. Thank you Brenda.

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Unfortunately...

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